This Can Make or Break Your Novel

Have you ever read a book where the dialogue felt stiff, forced, or unrealistic? You can have the best plot in the world, but if your characters feel stiff or your dialogue doesn't feel realistic, it can turn off even the most forgiving of readers. But don't worry, there are plenty of techniques you can use to create dialogue that feels natural and believable. In today's post, I'll share some tips on how to do just that.

1. Eavesdrop: One of the best ways to create realistic dialogue is to eavesdrop on real conversations. Listen to how people talk to each other in different situations and take note of the words they use, the pauses they take, and the emotions they express.

2. Read it out loud: Reading your dialogue out loud can help you hear if it sounds authentic or not. If it sounds awkward or stilted, try rewriting it until it flows more naturally.

3. Use contractions: In real-life conversations, people tend to use contractions (i.e. "don't" instead of "do not"). Using contractions in your dialogue can make it feel more natural and less formal.

4. Avoid exposition: Dialogue shouldn't just be a vehicle for delivering exposition. Instead, it should reveal character, advance the plot, and build tension. Avoid long monologues that only serve to explain things to the reader.

5. Don't be afraid of silence: In real-life conversations, there are often pauses or silences. Don't be afraid to include these in your dialogue. They can be just as important as the words being spoken.

As bestselling author Harlan Coben said, "Dialogue is not just quotation. It is grimaces, pauses, adjustments of blouse buttons, doodles on a napkin, and crossings of legs." So don't just focus on the words being spoken. As you write and your characters speak to you, pay attention to the nonverbal cues that can make your dialogue feel even more authentic.

-Andrew

The Indie Author Method